Proofreading/Corrections needed for Mangalam

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kmrasika
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Proofreading/Corrections needed for Mangalam

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Appreciate it if someone could proofread/correct the lyrics the following maṅgaḷa hāḍu of śrī vādirāja tīrtha. Appreciate it.🙏🏻

Link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WiDqMSMTOuw&pp=ygUPTWFuYWdhbGFtZSBqYXlh0gcJCdgAo7VqN5tD

tāḷa: khaṇḍacāpu
Composer: vādirāja tīrtha
Music: RK padmanābha

rāga: madhyamāvati 

pallavi
jaya maṅgaḷam nitya śubha maṅgaḷam 

caraṇam 1

vaikuṇṭha vāsanige vāṇīśā jvalitavage
duḥkhdali prahlāda jvalita lakṣmīśage
prākr̥tadali vasudēvaputranendenise
jōkēḷi gōkulakke jāri bandhavage

caraṇam 2
rāga: bēhāg
puṭṭamagu vādhavage pūtaniya khedagitage
toṭṭiloḷu malagi tūgisi kombage
duṣṭa śakaṭana muridu kr̥pārvata nemba daityana muṭṭi
prāṇava hegegā muddu kr̥ṣṇanige

caraṇam 3
rāga: āhiri
ambigā nekkedage aṅgededo nāḍidage
tumbida pālugaḷa tāne savidu
imbiṭṭu bālarige saviyekke savidavage
ambujākṣa namma hayavadanage

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Re: Proofreading/Corrections needed for Mangalam

Post by aaaaabbbbb »

Sure, I will post the corrected lyrics,soon

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Re: Proofreading/Corrections needed for Mangalam

Post by aaaaabbbbb »

Here are the corrected lyrics::
**
rāga: madhyamāvati

pallavi

jaya maṅgaḷam nitya śubha maṅgaḷam

caraṇam 1

vaikuṇṭha vāsanige vāṇīśā *golidavage*
*lOkadali*prahlāda *golida*lakṣmīśage
prākr̥tadali vasudēvaputranendenise
jōkēḷi *gōkulake* jāri *bandavage*

**
caraṇam 2
rāga: bēhāg
puṭṭamagu *vādavage* pūtaniya *kedahidage*
*toṭṭiloLu* malagi tūgisi kombage
duṣṭa śakaTana muridu *trnAvarta* nemba daityana muṭṭi
prāṇava *tegeda* muddu kr̥ṣṇanige

**
caraṇam 3
rāga: āhiri
girirAja *nettidage* aṅgane *yoDa* nāḍidage
tumbida *pālugaLa* tāne savidu
imbiṭṭu bālarige *saviyIkkI* savidavage
ambujākṣa namma hayavadanage
**

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