some own Carnatic based compositions for comments please

Music that is not orthodox Carnatic or Hindustani.
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ravichitrapu
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some own Carnatic based compositions for comments please

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In continuation of the post in Technical Discussions section (http://www.rasikas.org/forums/viewtopic. ... 99#p222699) - I am enclosing here links to audios of some carnatic music based songs composed by a friend - he wanted some feedback /suggestions /comments on them.
I request those of you who have the time to please see these links, listen to the audio, and give your feedback regarding the music and lyrics part also. thanks in advance. ravi chitrapu.

files of janakimurty uploaded on yourlisten.com
http://yourlisten.com/channel/content/1 ... am_ganesam
http://yourlisten.com/channel/content/1 ... naki_maata
http://yourlisten.com/channel/content/1 ... yaNa_murtE

i am giving the lyrics here below -
Sanskrit song on Ganesha - Nalinkantha ragam - Aadi talam.
p: GaNanAyakam bhajEham gaNEsam -
praNamAmyaham gouri sutham - ...
a: muni vanditam - mushika vAhanam -
Sani sApitham - vighna nASakam - .. . . gaNanAyakam
c: naLinikAntha rAga - praSansitham -
sakala lOka jIva sadA pUjitham -
siddhi sEvitham - buddhi bhAvitham -
sadA tava charaNam - gachchAmi - gachchAmi . . . . . gaNanAyakam

2. sri janaki maata - telugu - hamirkalyani ragam based - aadi taalam.
p: sri jAnaki - mAta -
nI jAli - chUpu - mA pai .. . . sri janaki
a: nE jEsina pApamulanu - manninchi . . . . sri janaki
ch: A janakuni ila velasi - I janAdrhuni ilavElpai
stree jAtike vannega nilachi - nA jApamunu vina dalachi . .... .. sri janaki.

3. suryanarayana murtE - telugu - ganamurthi ragam based - rupaka talam.
p: murtE - sri murtE - nArAyaNa murtE - srI sUryanArAyaNa murtE - namOstutE -
sakala jIva rAsulandu daya chUpi - dIvinchu - . .. . .. sri murtE
ch: I bhU manDala mantayu - nI bhAsura Sakti pradam
jIvAdhAram nIvE
karuNa chUpi - kanikarinchi - challani chUpulu mApai
kuripinchi - pAlinchu mamu - dIvinchu. . .. . . sri murtE.

thanks & regards.
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